(原文）
"Ah...Ex..Excuse me..."
Misa spoke to Kenji. He was surprised and answerd,
"Wha..What?"
"Will you kill me...? I'll be killed? "
"......"
He couldn't answer.
"Do I have to die..? I don't want to die."
She continued,
"I promis that I keep your secret, forever. I won't say anything to everybody. Please...please..."
"I don't hope...to kill you, I want to erase you, but if I do it, I don't know waht they will do for me...., sorry...I spooky them. I'd like to quite if I can, but...., I had known too much. It's too late for me."
As Misa tried to make desperate presuasion.
"Why don't you escape with me? ..and give yourself up to the Police. I won't testify against about you."
Suddenly some police officers broke into the secret base and he was arrested. Misa was protected from them. Kenji looked like felt relieved when he was put handcuffs.
Actually Yumi went to talk with Police about that thing. Fortunataly, Misa's cell phone had a GPS function, The Police could specific and find this place easily.
After that Misa got a bitter telling - off from the Police officers, her parents and Yumi. Yumi held her and cried. Misa felt good to be living , However, she had to retake all her examinations.
"Poor me.., but it's my own fault,though?"
Fin.
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（訳）
「あ、あの・・。」
ミサはケンジに話しかけた。ケンジは驚いて、それから返事した。
「な、何？」
「ミサの事、殺すの？ ミサ、殺されちゃうの？」
「・・・・。」
ケンジは答える事が出来なかった。
「ミサ、死ななきゃいけないの？ミサ、死にたくないよ。」
ミサは続けた。
「約束する。約束するから。絶対秘密は喋らない。ずっと！誰にも、何も言わないから・・だから、だから・・・。」
「僕だって、殺したくはない・・。逃がしてあげたい。だけど・・、だけど、もし僕がそんなことしたら、何されるか・・。ごめん・・。怖いんだよ。 出来る事ならこんな事もう辞めたいんだ。でも、僕は知りすぎてしまった。もう遅いんだよ。」
ミサは必死で説得した。
「一緒に逃げない？で、貴方は自首するの。ミサ、貴方に不利になるような証言はしないから！」
その時突然数人の警察官がアジトに突入してきて、そしてケンジを逮捕した。ミサは保護された。ケンジは手錠を掛けられたとき、ホッとしているように見えた。
ユミが警察に事件の事を通報したのだ。ラッキーな事に、ミサの携帯にはGPS機能が備わっており、警察は簡単に場所を特定する事が出来た。 その後、ミサは警官と両親、そしてユミにこっぴどくしかられた。ユミはミサに抱きついて泣いた。ミサは生きてて良かったと思った。
しかしながら・・、ミサは全科目追試を受ける羽目になった。
「かわいそーなミサ・・！ま、自分が悪いんだけどね・・。」
＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊
（訂正文）
"Ah...Ex..Excuse me.."
Misa spoke to Kenji. He was surprised and answerd.
"Wha..What?"
"Will you kill me..? I'll be killed?"
"...."
He couldn't answer.
"Do I have to die? I don't want to die."
She continued.
"I promis that I'll keep your secret, forever. I won't say anything to nobody..Please..please.."
"I don't want ..to kill you, I want to release you, but..but if I do that, I don't know what they will do to me, sorry..I scared of them.., I'd like to quite if I could. but, I know too much. It's too late for me."
Misa tried to make a desperate presuasion .
"Why don't you let me go and give yourself up to the Police? I promise I testify against you."
Suddenly some Police officers broke into the secret base and Kenji was arrested. Misa was saved from the criminals. Kenji looked relieved when he was put into handcuffs.
Then Yumi went to talk with the Police about the incident. Fotunataly, Misa's cell phone had a GPS function, The Police were able to findn specific the place easily. After that Misa was scolded from the Police officers , her parents and Yumi. Yumi held her and cried. Misa felt good to be alive. However, she had to retake all her examinations.
"Poor me.., but it's my own fault, though?"
**************************************
（補足、感想）
微妙なニュアンスの違いがあるのか、結構単語を違うものに変更された。
Suddenly some police officers broke into the secret base and he was arrested.と
Misa was protected from them.のところは、「彼」ではなく「ケンジ」と名指しに、「彼ら」ではなく、「犯人たち」と表記したほうが、分かりやすいとのこと。
Yumi went to talk with a Police about that thing.も、that thingでは、どのことか曖昧になるので、the incidentとするよう言われた。
相変わらず前置詞とか苦手・・。何かを入れなくちゃいけないのは分かるんだけど、それってto? for? by?? なに？？まだそんなことでツマヅイテいる。だから結構一か八かで言ってみて、あ、直された！あ、何も言われなかった・・！とそんな感じ。でも、何も言われなかったからといって、正しかったのか、それとも、放置されたのかは・・・謎だけど・・。
口頭だけだと、細かいことまでは言われないけれど、こうして記述してあるものだと、間違いを全部直してもらえるから、とてもよい♪
だけど・・・。「前回も注意したのに！！また同じところを間違ってる！」とかって思われてたら怖いなあ・・。やっば～・・！
お気に召しましたら、是非是非ぽちっと♪押してくださいまし～。
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"Ah...Ex..Excuse me..."
Misa spoke to Kenji. He was surprised and answerd,
"Wha..What?"
"Will you kill me...? I'll be killed? "
"......"
He couldn't answer.
"Do I have to die..? I don't want to die."
She continued,
"I promis that I keep your secret, forever. I won't say anything to everybody. Please...please..."
"I don't hope...to kill you, I want to erase you, but if I do it, I don't know waht they will do for me...., sorry...I spooky them. I'd like to quite if I can, but...., I had known too much. It's too late for me."
As Misa tried to make desperate presuasion.
"Why don't you escape with me? ..and give yourself up to the Police. I won't testify against about you."
Suddenly some police officers broke into the secret base and he was arrested. Misa was protected from them. Kenji looked like felt relieved when he was put handcuffs.
Actually Yumi went to talk with Police about that thing. Fortunataly, Misa's cell phone had a GPS function, The Police could specific and find this place easily.
After that Misa got a bitter telling - off from the Police officers, her parents and Yumi. Yumi held her and cried. Misa felt good to be living , However, she had to retake all her examinations.
"Poor me.., but it's my own fault,though?"
Fin.
＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊
（訳）
「あ、あの・・。」
ミサはケンジに話しかけた。ケンジは驚いて、それから返事した。
「な、何？」
「ミサの事、殺すの？ ミサ、殺されちゃうの？」
「・・・・。」
ケンジは答える事が出来なかった。
「ミサ、死ななきゃいけないの？ミサ、死にたくないよ。」
ミサは続けた。
「約束する。約束するから。絶対秘密は喋らない。ずっと！誰にも、何も言わないから・・だから、だから・・・。」
「僕だって、殺したくはない・・。逃がしてあげたい。だけど・・、だけど、もし僕がそんなことしたら、何されるか・・。ごめん・・。怖いんだよ。 出来る事ならこんな事もう辞めたいんだ。でも、僕は知りすぎてしまった。もう遅いんだよ。」
ミサは必死で説得した。
「一緒に逃げない？で、貴方は自首するの。ミサ、貴方に不利になるような証言はしないから！」
その時突然数人の警察官がアジトに突入してきて、そしてケンジを逮捕した。ミサは保護された。ケンジは手錠を掛けられたとき、ホッとしているように見えた。
ユミが警察に事件の事を通報したのだ。ラッキーな事に、ミサの携帯にはGPS機能が備わっており、警察は簡単に場所を特定する事が出来た。 その後、ミサは警官と両親、そしてユミにこっぴどくしかられた。ユミはミサに抱きついて泣いた。ミサは生きてて良かったと思った。
しかしながら・・、ミサは全科目追試を受ける羽目になった。
「かわいそーなミサ・・！ま、自分が悪いんだけどね・・。」
＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊＊
（訂正文）
"Ah...Ex..Excuse me.."
Misa spoke to Kenji. He was surprised and answerd.
"Wha..What?"
"Will you kill me..? I'll be killed?"
"...."
He couldn't answer.
"Do I have to die? I don't want to die."
She continued.
"I promis that I'll keep your secret, forever. I won't say anything to nobody..Please..please.."
"I don't want ..to kill you, I want to release you, but..but if I do that, I don't know what they will do to me, sorry..I scared of them.., I'd like to quite if I could. but, I know too much. It's too late for me."
Misa tried to make a desperate presuasion .
"Why don't you let me go and give yourself up to the Police? I promise I testify against you."
Suddenly some Police officers broke into the secret base and Kenji was arrested. Misa was saved from the criminals. Kenji looked relieved when he was put into handcuffs.
Then Yumi went to talk with the Police about the incident. Fotunataly, Misa's cell phone had a GPS function, The Police were able to findn specific the place easily. After that Misa was scolded from the Police officers , her parents and Yumi. Yumi held her and cried. Misa felt good to be alive. However, she had to retake all her examinations.
"Poor me.., but it's my own fault, though?"
**************************************
（補足、感想）
微妙なニュアンスの違いがあるのか、結構単語を違うものに変更された。
Suddenly some police officers broke into the secret base and he was arrested.と
Misa was protected from them.のところは、「彼」ではなく「ケンジ」と名指しに、「彼ら」ではなく、「犯人たち」と表記したほうが、分かりやすいとのこと。
Yumi went to talk with a Police about that thing.も、that thingでは、どのことか曖昧になるので、the incidentとするよう言われた。
相変わらず前置詞とか苦手・・。何かを入れなくちゃいけないのは分かるんだけど、それってto? for? by?? なに？？まだそんなことでツマヅイテいる。だから結構一か八かで言ってみて、あ、直された！あ、何も言われなかった・・！とそんな感じ。でも、何も言われなかったからといって、正しかったのか、それとも、放置されたのかは・・・謎だけど・・。
口頭だけだと、細かいことまでは言われないけれど、こうして記述してあるものだと、間違いを全部直してもらえるから、とてもよい♪
だけど・・・。「前回も注意したのに！！また同じところを間違ってる！」とかって思われてたら怖いなあ・・。やっば～・・！
お気に召しましたら、是非是非ぽちっと♪押してくださいまし～。
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