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2023-04-06 13:07:23 | Grammarly

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I usually take more than a month to finish a novel, but this one, "The Housemaid" by Lisa McFadden, took me less than a week. I can't even imagine how anyone can think of a story like this.  A young woman finds work as a maid at a gorgeous, almost palatial house inhabited by fabulous husband and wife, with an adorable small daughter.  Everything seems perfect at first.  It was a rather slow-start, and initially I was wondering where it was going.  Also, being written in deceivingly simple English throughout, the first several chapters made me even think that perhaps this was not going to be such a roallercoaster ride of a thriller as advertised.  How wrong I was.  The story was exactly what the ads and a lot of people said it was: A page-turner, with jaw-dropping twists.  Rivetting!  Addictive!  Unputdownable!  Mind-blowing!!  I read this almost whenever I could for the past week, my presbyotic eyes literally glued to my Kindle Paperwhite with my glasses sitting on top of my head: on the train to and from work, during lunch break at the nearby Delifrance bakery/restaurant, as well as at home.  At one time during lunch I almost uttered a word out loud, a "Whaaat!?" or something like that.  The author is introduced as a practicing physician.  What a talent.  If you like to be entertained by a fast-paced psychothriller that makes your eyes open like a pair of saucers, this one's for you.

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I usually take more than a month to finish a novel, but this one, "The Housemaid" by Lisa McFadden, took me less than a week. I can't even imagine how anyone can think of a story like this.  A young woman finds work as a maid at a gorgeous, almost palatial house inhabited by fabulous husband and wife, with an adorable small daughter.  Everything seems perfect at first.  It was a rather slow-start, and initially I was wondering where it was going.  Also, being written in deceivingly simple English throughout, the first several chapters made me even think that perhaps this was not going to be such a roallercoaster ride of a thriller as advertised.  How wrong I was.  The story was exactly what the ads and a lot of people said it was: A page-turner, with jaw-dropping twists.  Rivetting!  Addictive!  Unputdownable!  Mind-blowing!!  I read this almost whenever I could for the past week, my presbyotic eyes literally glued to my Kindle Paperwhite with my glasses sitting on top of my head: on the train to and from work, during lunch break at the nearby Delifrance bakery/restaurant, as well as at homeAt one time during lunch I almost uttered a word out loud, a "Whaaat!?" or something like that.  The author is introduced as a practicing physician.  What a talent.  If you like to be entertained by a fast-paced psychothriller that makes your eyes open like a pair of saucers, this one's for you.

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Finishing a novel usually takes me over a month, but The Housemaid by Lisa McFadden took me less than a week. I can't imagine how anyone can think of a story like this. A young woman finds work as a maid at a gorgeous, almost palatial house inhabited by a fabulous husband and wife with an adorable young daughter. Initially, everything seems perfect. It was a rather slow start, and initially, I wondered where it was going. Also, written in deceivingly simple English throughout, the first several chapters made me think this might not be such a rollercoaster ride of a thriller as advertised. How wrong I was! The story was exactly what the ads and many people said: a page-turner with jaw-dropping twists. Riveting! Addictive! Unputdownable! Mind-blowing! I read this almost whenever I could for the past week, my presbyopic eyes glued to my Kindle Paperwhite, with my glasses on my head: at home, on the train to and from work, and during lunch at the nearby Delifrance bakery/restaurant. Once during lunch, I almost uttered a "Whaaat!?" or something like that. The author is introduced as a practicing physician. What a talent. If you like being entertained by a fast-paced psychothriller that makes your eyes open like a pair of saucers, this one's for you.

 

 

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