ChatGPT:
Great follow-up — yes, the same principles apply to “apparatus” or “device” as they do to “system,” and your instincts are again correct.
🔹 Is “Semiconductor manufacturing device and control method thereof” natural?
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In patent language:
✅ Yes, it’s completely acceptable and commonly used.
This structure is standard in patent titles and claims, where “thereof” functions as a formal shorthand for “of the device”. -
In general English or technical writing:
⚠️ No, it sounds unnatural or overly stiff, because a method doesn’t naturally belong to a device — it's something used with or for it.
🔍 Why the awkwardness?
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“Method of a device” (or “thereof”) implies ownership or internal origin — which isn’t quite accurate: a method isn’t a property of a device.
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“Method for a device” is clearer: the method is intended to operate or control the device.
✅ Comparison Table:
Phrase | Use in Patents | Use in General English | Notes |
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control method thereof | ✅ Common and accepted | ⚠️ Sounds stiff | Legal shorthand; idiomatic in patent style |
control method of the device | ⚠️ Acceptable, but awkward | ❌ Not idiomatic | Avoid unless required by parallel structure |
control method for the device | ✅ Good | ✅ Natural | Clear and idiomatic in all contexts |
its control method | 🚫 Rare in patents | ✅ Natural | Too informal for patents, but fine in general writing |
✔ So for your example:
Patent context:
“Semiconductor manufacturing device and control method thereof” ✅ Standard and acceptable.
General technical writing:
“Semiconductor manufacturing device and control method for the device”
or
“Semiconductor manufacturing device and its control method” ✅ More natural and clearer.
あなた:
ChatGPT:
Yes — you’re exactly right.
✅ At the end of the day:
“system and method therefor”
is better than
“system and method thereof”
in most technical and legal contexts, especially in patents.
🔍 Why?
1. Precision of meaning
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“Therefor” = for that
→ clearly expresses that the method is intended for use with the system
→ ✅ semantically accurate -
“Thereof” = of that
→ implies the method is of or belonging to the system
→ ⚠️ less precise, possibly awkward (a system doesn’t “own” a method)
2. Usage in patents
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Both are legally accepted, but:
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“method therefor” is more precise and favored in modern practice
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“method thereof” is older and more commonly seen in legacy documents
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📘 Example from actual patents:
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"An imaging system and a control method therefor" ✅
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"A communication device and a method therefor" ✅
These are standard and natural in patent titles, abstracts, and claims.
✅ Final verdict:
✔️ Use “system and method therefor” — especially in patent and formal technical writing.
It’s more accurate, more natural, and better aligned with professional standards.
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