英会話&中国語会話学習の軌跡

現在は、基本独学な日々です。試行錯誤しながらボチボチやっています。

タイトル未定・・・

2005年11月19日 | 勉強会・短編

こちらは、新たに書き直した方です

Chapter 1 " Ken meets Ron"

There was a large park in the city where Ken lived, the park didn't have a playground for the kids, but nonetheless Ken loved going there, since he was a little boy.

The park had an old huge cherry tree. He didn't know how old that tree was, but he guesed it was over 500 years old, so, the trunk was mammothlike.

Ken came to see the tree, whenever he felt angry, worry or sad at home or school. He loved to lay down under the tree on the lawn with his daydream. He was able to do anything, got everything he wants, went everywhere he wants to go..and he could say clearly " No " to his parents , teachers and friends in his imagination world.

Ken was a 15 year old junior highschool student. He was pure Japanese, but he looked like foreigner, because he was the tallest boy in his school, and he had clear skin , hazel eyes, and his hair sometimes looked blonde especially under the sun.

He was really handsome boy ,of course he was idolized by the girls, but it was only first impression until the girls learn of his character.

He always agreed with everyone. He had no opinion. He had never decided himself everything.

He had a lot of friends, but none of them were his close friend. However, he didn't mind it, because he was a reclusive type and he loved being alone with the tree.

The tree always wrapped his lonely heart around gently.

 

One warm spring evening, Ken had being there. Ken looked up and gazed blankly at the pale sky beyond light pink floweres. He slided his right hand into his pocket, pulled out a small stuffed animal and then , he took the animal's tail with his fingers and  swang it in front of his face.

"Actually, I didn't need you...." he grumbled to the toy.  He bought it yesterday when he went down the street on his way home from cram school. He had felt thirsty and was going to look in a convenience store. It was wrong of him in the first place. He turned left at a liquor shop and then he noticed an ancient-looking shop.

"Wow...I didn't know that there was a curiosity shop in my town..!." Ken yelled.
The shop's signboard said the shop's name was " Parallel world" . Ken took an interest in the shop. He propped his bicycle against a wall, stood outside the shop, took a look inside the shop hardly.

The shop had lots of marvelous furnishings, strange shape chair, queer ornament, specimens of insects, stuffed bear and so on.

Suddenly, the owner who had thin and white hair noticed Ken, and beckoned him into his shop. He looked about 80 years old. He wore spectacles. The very thick glasses made his eyes look bigger. If he straighten his back, he might have been tall, but he was bent with age, so, he was tall as high as Ken's waist. He wore a deepgreen knitted hat and worn-out yellowish thin sweater with queer emblem. Ken thought the owner had poor taste in clothes, strange as same as his shop.

Ken went into the shop. Inside of the shop was bigger than he expected. He found a great many clock, pendulum clocks, cuckoo clockes, grandfather clocks, pocket watch, table clock and sandglasses. Some of them turn counterclockwise. Some of them had extra time, " 45:00?! " he gasped, but the owner said calmly " No wonder, the clock was used a country that had 45 hours in a day."




最初の・・・

2005年11月19日 | 勉強会・短編

お話をまた英語の練習がてら書き始めています。

ラッキーマンツーの時に見てもらったところ・・・、もっとこうしたほうが良いとアドバイスをされたので、只今書き直しております。

ちなみに、こちらは、アドバイスを受ける前の最初に作った部分です。

There was a large park in the city, Ken lived . The park was featureless, but Ken had loved there, since he was a little boy. The park had an old huge cherry tree. He didn't know how old that tree was. but He guessed it was over 500 years old, so, the trunk was mammothlike.

Ken came to see the tree, whenever he had something unpleasant at home or school.He loved to lay down under the tree on lawn, nothing to do, just stay for hours and hours.

Ken was a 15 year old junior highschool student. He had a clear skin and hazel eyes.His hair sometimes looked blonde especially under the sun. (He didn't tried hair dyeing himself at all.) and, he was tall. He was pure Japanese, but his figure looked like quite foreigner. He was really handsome boy so,he was idolized by girls, but it was only first impression before girls would noticed his character. He was so passive character, he always decide himself nothing. He had a lot of friendlike... He had no close friend, but it was not important for him, because he loved that he was alone rather staied with someone else. Ken looked up and gazed blankly at the pale sky which was cravice of light pink froweres. "Actually, I didn't want you...!" He picked up a small stuffed animal in his poket, and then, he took the animal's tail with his fingers and swang it in front of his face. ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

It happened to him when he went down the street on his way home from his cram school. He had felt thirsty. He turned left at a liquor shop, as look in convenience store , noticed an ancient-looking shop . It seemed curiosity shop. The shop had lots of marvelous furnishings. The shop attract his interest, he propped his bicycle on a wall, and he looke in the shop hardly. The owner noticed Ken and beckoned him into his shop. The owner was about 80 year old, if he straighten his back, he might have been tall. but he was bent with age.. so, he was tall as high as Ken's waist. His hair was thin and white, He wore a deepgreen knitted hat and worn-out yellowish thin sweater. He also wore spectacles. They were very thick glasses. The glasseed made his eyes looked bigger. Ken wanted to leave soon, but he couldn't. He stayed this shop for a long time..until the owner's loooooooooong his history finished. In the end, he let him bought a queer stuffed animal.