障害物の検知情報：of, about, on

この装置は、車両周囲の障害物の検知情報に基づいて車両の速度を抑制する。

ChatGPT:

This device suppresses the vehicle's speed based on detection information of obstacles around the vehicle.

あなた:

How about the following instead of "detection information of obstacles": 1. detection information about obstacles 2. information of detection of obstacles 3. information about detection of obstacles 4. information on detection of obstacles 5. detection information on obstacles

ChatGPT:

Here’s how each alternative sounds in terms of clarity and naturalness:

1. "detection information about obstacles" ✅ (Good)

   • This is a natural and clear phrasing.
   • "Detection information" is commonly used in technical contexts.
   • "About obstacles" clarifies what the detection concerns.

2. "information of detection of obstacles" ❌ (Unnatural)

   • "Information of detection" sounds awkward and not commonly used.
   • The double "of" makes it less fluid.

3. "information about detection of obstacles" ✅ (Acceptable)

   • This is grammatically correct and clear.
   • However, "detection information about obstacles" (option 1) is more concise and direct.

4. "information on detection of obstacles" ✅ (Good)

   • "Information on" is a common phrase in formal and technical writing.
   • This is slightly more formal than "information about detection of obstacles."

5. "detection information on obstacles" ✅ (Also good)

   • This is concise and keeps "detection information" as a single unit, which is common in technical writing.

Best Choices

• "detection information about obstacles" (1)
• "detection information on obstacles" (5)
• "information on detection of obstacles" (4)

Final Sentence with the Best Option

"This device suppresses the vehicle's speed based on detection information about obstacles around the vehicle."
or
"This device suppresses the vehicle's speed based on detection information on obstacles around the vehicle."

Would you like to prioritize technical accuracy, natural flow, or brevity?

あなた:

Which is better, "detection information of obstacles", "detection information on obstacles", or "detection information about obstacles"?

ChatGPT:

Among "detection information of obstacles," "detection information on obstacles," and "detection information about obstacles," the best choice depends on naturalness and technical clarity.

Comparison of Each Phrase

1. "detection information of obstacles" ❌ (Unnatural)

   • "Information of" is generally not a common construction in English.
   • "Detection information of obstacles" sounds awkward and less natural.

2. "detection information on obstacles" ✅ (Good, formal/technical)

   • "Information on" is a standard phrase in technical and formal writing.
   • This sounds slightly more precise and is commonly used in scientific and engineering contexts.

3. "detection information about obstacles" ✅ (Also good, slightly more natural)

   • "Information about" is commonly used in everyday and technical English.
   • This sounds a bit more general than "on obstacles," but it's still clear and natural.

Best Choice for Technical Writing

• "detection information on obstacles" → Slightly more formal and precise.
• "detection information about obstacles" → More general and natural.

Final Recommendation:

• If the document is highly technical (patents, research, specifications) → "detection information on obstacles"
• If the document is general technical writing (manuals, descriptions, general reports) → "detection information about obstacles"

So, your sentence would be:
✅ "This device suppresses the vehicle's speed based on detection information on obstacles around the vehicle." (Technical)
✅ "This device suppresses the vehicle's speed based on detection information about obstacles around the vehicle." (General)