Q11: Do you think fast-food restaurants are a good thing for people?

A: I think fast-food restaurants are a good thing for people.

I have two reasons for this.

First, a lot of people are very busy and tired.

When they have no time to cook, they can eat at fast-food restaurants.

Second, fast-food restaurants are convenient for people.

They serve tasty food so quickly.

In conclusion, I think fast-food restaurants are a good thing for people.

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Q10: Do you think that people should have priority seats on trains?

A: I think that people should have priority seats on trains. 

I have two reasons for this.

First. it is difficult for old people to standing in the train. ①

Second, I wish people in Japan are kind to every people. ②

For example, people can offer their seats to old people. ③

That is why I think people should have priority seats on trains.

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修正

① old people は少し失礼なので、elderly 年配のpeople/ 

     standing in the train → keep on standing on the train

② wish → hope ※実現可能な事には hope を使おう/ every people → everyone

     , so having priority seats is effective有効的な/ friendly年配に優しい 

　　soだから、と理由を追加しよう。

③ old → elderly

清書

I think that people should have priority seats on trains.

I have two reasons for this.

First, it is difficult for elderly people to keep standing on the train.

Second, I hope people in Japan are kind to elderly people., 

so having priority seats is effective and friendly for them.

That is why I think that people should have priority seats on trains.

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Q9: Do you think it is important for children to play sports?

A: I think it is important for children to play sports. I have two reasons.

First, playing sports is very fun. For example, I play dance every day. ①

After dancing, I can get refreshed well. ②

Second, moving body is very fun and healthy. ③

For these reasons, I think it is important for children to play sports. ④

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修正

① play dance → danceではなくて、スポーツにしよう。

     Second で fun を使っているので、fun → goodにしよう。

② get refreshed well → get very/ so refreshed

③ moving body → exercising/ very を多用しない→a lot of fun

④ I think "that" 

清書

I think that it is important for children to play sports.

I have two reasons for this.

First, playing sports is good for your health.  

For example. I play socoer every day.

After playing it, I can get very refreshed.

Second, exercising is a lot of fun and healthy.

For these reasons above, I think that it is important for childen to do sports.

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Q8: It is important for children to do housework?

A: I think that it is important for children to do housework. 

I have two reasons for this.

First, when they grow up, it will be helpful for them.

Second, they can experience a lot of things through housework.

Then, they will learn the difficulty in doing various kinds of housework.

In conclusion, I think that it is important for children to do housework.

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Q7: Do you think it is better for people to eat at restaurants or at home?

A: I think that it is better for people to eat at home. I have two reasons for this. First of all, I can learn how to many kind of cook. ① 

For example I can cook with my mother. ② 

Second of all, my mother is cook very well. ③ 

For instance I like pizza the best. ④ 

In conclusion, I think that it is better for people to eat at home. 

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修正

① how to “cook”/ kind → たくさんの種類、だから複数形 kinds/ cook → foods ※food は不可算名詞だが、種類のことを言う時は可算名詞。 

② For example ”,” カンマ/ I enjoy preparing 準備する・作る dinner with my mother. 

③ is cook ダブル動詞は NG. → cooks のみ. 

④ Second of all “,” ←カンマ/ lot of → “a” lot of 

⑤ For instance “,” ←カンマ/ お⺟さんは料理がとても上手です。 例えば、「私はピザが一番好きです」では少し通じないので、 she makes tasty pizza, so we do not have to eat out.外食する ※ お題が for people なので、Second ではお家で食べる方が高くない・手 頃な、安い、健康的な、などとした方が良いが、オリジナルでも合格で きるでしょう。

 it is more reasonable/ less expensive/ cheaper/ healthier など比較級を 書くと得点が伸びる。 

清書

I think it is better for people to eat at home. I have two reasons for this.  

First, they can learn how to prepare various dishes from their family.  

For example. children can enjoy cooking dinner with their parents.  

Second, homemade meals are often healthier and more affordable than eating out. 

In conclusion, I think eating at home is better for people. 

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