Q7: Do you think it is better for people to eat at restaurants or at home?

A: I think that it is better for people to eat at home. I have two reasons for this. First of all, I can learn how to many kind of cook. ① 

For example I can cook with my mother. ② 

Second of all, my mother is cook very well. ③ 

For instance I like pizza the best. ④ 

In conclusion, I think that it is better for people to eat at home. 

合計 68 語 

修正

① how to “cook”/ kind → たくさんの種類、だから複数形 kinds/ cook → foods ※food は不可算名詞だが、種類のことを言う時は可算名詞。 

② For example ”,” カンマ/ I enjoy preparing 準備する・作る dinner with my mother. 

③ is cook ダブル動詞は NG. → cooks のみ. 

④ Second of all “,” ←カンマ/ lot of → “a” lot of 

⑤ For instance “,” ←カンマ/ お⺟さんは料理がとても上手です。 例えば、「私はピザが一番好きです」では少し通じないので、 she makes tasty pizza, so we do not have to eat out.外食する ※ お題が for people なので、Second ではお家で食べる方が高くない・手 頃な、安い、健康的な、などとした方が良いが、オリジナルでも合格で きるでしょう。

 it is more reasonable/ less expensive/ cheaper/ healthier など比較級を 書くと得点が伸びる。 

清書

I think it is better for people to eat at home. I have two reasons for this.  

First, they can learn how to prepare various dishes from their family.  

For example. children can enjoy cooking dinner with their parents.  

Second, homemade meals are often healthier and more affordable than eating out. 

In conclusion, I think eating at home is better for people. 

合計 74 語