はるくん３

I think that it is important for children to play sports.

I have two reasons for this.

The first reason is that children need to exercise to be healthy.

If "they" 代名詞！play sports like baseball or basketball, they can "stay fit." 健康でいられる

The second reason is that when they play sports, they can challenge various things and make new friends through sports. 

This is why I think that children should play sports.

※客観的に意見を述べた後、For example, で自分の経験を書いてもOK!

When I was on the baseball team, my teammates were very nice.

We are all friends still now.

はるくん２

It is better for people to eat at home.

I have two reasons for this.

First"," ← 忘れずに！ I can get healthy.

→ The first reason is that "people" can "stay" healthy.

ex: For example, they can avoid 準2級 避ける chemicals 準2級 化学物質 in food as much as possible.

Second,  I like mother food because "M"y 小文字で！ mother cooks food is very nice taste.

→ The second reason is that I like homemade dishes because my mother cooks well and they are tasty.

That is why I think that people should eat at home.

はるくん１

I think that convenience stores should open twenty four hours a day. 

→ twenty-four

Because I have two reasons.  → Because不要

First, if I catch a cold I can always buy food.

→ if I catch a cold","

※ 主語をpeople にして、客観的に書こう！

ex: if people catch a cold or become sick and need something

      immediately, 準2級 直ぐに they can go and get it anytime.

Second, if I am hungry, I can choose many food and I sell my favorite foods.

→ many food を a lot of foods 種類の話をする時、food は可算名詞

→ sell ではなくて、buy

※これも客観的に書こう！

ex: if people are hungry and have nothing to eat, they can choose from various/ または a wide range 準2級 範囲 of foods 

ex: there are always various foods available 準2級 すぐに入手できる、利用できる at convenience stores anytime.

That is why I think that convenience stores should open twenty four hours a day. 

→ twenty-four

Q31: Do you think it is good for students to visit other schools' festival?

A: I think students should visit other schools' festivals.

I have two reasons for this.

First of all, it is inspiring and refreshing for students to visit other schools' festivals

because each school has its own unique tradition and culture that they can experience and learn from.

Second, they can enjoy themselves and communicate with the students there.

In conclusion, students should call at other schools' festivals.

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・inspiring 準2級 人を元気づける、鼓舞する、感激させる 

・refreshing 2級 心身をさわやかにする、元気づける、すがすがしい、目新しくておもしろい 

・unique 準2級 唯一の、他に類を見ない、比類のない、独特な、ユニークな 

・tradition 準2級 伝統、慣例、(芸術上の、古来の)流儀、型、伝説 

・call at 場所を訪ねる

Q30: Do you think schools should have a cafeteria?

A: Yes, I do. I have two reasons.

First, it is convenient for students to have a cafeteria in their schools

because they do not have to go out of their school when they want something to eat.

Second, a cafeteria in schools can help parents especially those who hardly have time to prepare lunch for their children.

In conclusion, I think that schools should have a cafeteria for students.

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